Pose Practice - Random Pose

I honestly don't know how well the anatomy is done. If people who KNOW about anatomy would critique this please, it would be appreciated.

I'd prefer people not just come up and say "it looks fine to me" I need actual critique. If you don't know a lot about anatomy, please don't comment till the picture is colored.
This is for my benefit of getting proper feedback before the final product is made.

Thanks for your understanding~
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© FMA/FMAB: Hiromu Arakawa

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